I looked up “villanelle” because I thought it was a Spanish word.
It might be.
But it’s a poem structure. Like the one written.
I hate it.
Because…
She broke the fourth wall. I despise breaking the fourth wall. It’s why I don’t like the Deadpool movies.
Yes, Ryan Reynolds can be funny, but I am a firm believer in movies being movies. There is no audience. What I see on the screen is really happening. I don’t want to be talked to as if I exist. I want to watch a story.
So this poem. This villanelle. She broke the fourth wall. And I don’t think it’s clever.
Don’t let the audience know you’re there.
Not in poetry. Not in a song.
The story is really happening. It’s in the middle of taking place.





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